Once upon a time there were three girls and their names are Maddi, Jane. They were best friends and they also like to go out for a walk. One day they went walking down a rocky path as the were walking the saw big crusty mountain. As they walked up the mountain and came back down the were lost and the couldn’t find their way back to Jane’s house. Them they tried to use their phones but they had no signal. They were also thinking about their parent’s how the are worried about all three of them. As they stayed there for a little while the sun was going down it almost looked like a ombre cloud. They thought that they would never see their parents again. As the sun went down Maddi fell asleep while Jane was watching her. As the sun came up Maddie had woke up, when Maddi woke up she had looked around the place and see saw Jane sleeping. As it came on to 8:00 Jane had woke up. When they were both awake they had saw a man come past with a car.
TO BE CONTINUED
This is so of my writing I didn't finish it but I will probably finish it off on Friday.
What we did was that we got in a group of 2 the partner was Tipi.
What we worked on was where should I put my full stops and when should I use commas.
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