Writing: Immersion Assembly

This is my first writing task for this week and for this term too. As you know it is a new term which is known as term 4 and the last term of the year. On the first day of school we had Immersion Assembly. So when we came back from Immersion Assembly we had to write a recount on what happened.

Writing: Discriptive Language Into Sentence

Walt: Paint image in readers mind.


1
As you walk through the forest you see tall, thick tree trunk. As you go further and further and deeper and deeper you will notice that the forest will go darker and darker.

2.
When you walk in the forest you will see the leave dropping for the darkening green tree. As the leaves are dropping the other leave are flowing in the air.

3.
As you walk on the green grass it’s like and reflection of the leaves of the tree. Underneath the layer of grass thirs a thick layer of mud.

4.

As you walk through the forest you will feel a wing flowing beneath your skin as it makes your skin have goosebumps as it makes you shriver.

Task Discription: This writing is the same exact task as last weeks task but just diffrent settings. The last one, the focus was on the beach and this week our focus is now on a forest. This one was a bit easier because last weeks writing gave me a anvantige because now I know what to do and what I needed to work on from my mistakes from last week.

Writing: Descriptive language into Sentence.

Walt: Paint image in readers mind.

Ocean

The Ocean with the colour of sparkly blue fades in white, as the calm waves crashing and creeping up to the golden sand.

Sand
As the bright sun shines on the beautiful sand it becomes golden under the shiny beautiful lighting.

Sky
The sky is blue like a reflection of the beautiful ocean with white fluffy clouds rotating around with birds flying around.

Imagination
As the wave come the waves come crashing in to the big rocks out to sea. As it makes a beautiful sight from far away.

Task description: What we had ti do was to look at the photos or the setting then we had picture that certain photo and make a sentence but with descriptive language and it was okay if we went over the top. This was so fun to do.