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Monday 6 May 2019

Writing: Discriptive Language Into Sentence

Walt: Paint image in readers mind.

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As you walk through the forest you see tall, thick tree trunk. As you go further and further and deeper and deeper you will notice that the forest will go darker and darker.

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When you walk in the forest you will see the leave dropping for the darkening green tree. As the leaves are dropping the other leave are flowing in the air.

3.
As you walk on the green grass it’s like and reflection of the leaves of the tree. Underneath the layer of grass thirs a thick layer of mud.

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As you walk through the forest you will feel a wing flowing beneath your skin as it makes your skin have goosebumps as it makes you shriver.


Task Discription: This writing is the same exact task as last weeks task but just diffrent settings. The last one, the focus was on the beach and this week our focus is now on a forest. This one was a bit easier because last weeks writing gave me a anvantige because now I know what to do and what I needed to work on from my mistakes from last week.


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