WRITING A NARRATIVE

Once upon a time there lived a girl named Carmella. Carmella decided to go have a walk down to have a look at the creek down near by Pt England school. So Carmella got her stuff and headed down to the creek. Finally Carmella was at the creek. She was so surprised because there was heaps and heaps of tagging on most of the pipes that Carmella saw. What she saw was heaps of overgrown grass and leaves. Also there was a path but I think it turned into a muddy path. Also what Carmella noticed was the pipes that had tagging on it. It was shaped like a T and she thought it was very cool. So Carmella decided to walk along the muddy path she was a really brave kind of girl. So she walk down the muddy path and suddenly Carmella ends up in a sticky also muddy tunnel tunnel. It had heaps of sticky white spider webs there were also very dirty water two. A little while after she saw some light across the tunnel. So she walked and walked until she got to the end of the tunnel. Once Carmella got closer and closer and then she saw bright light so she’d went closer and closer and finally she was there but then a creature came and cased Carmella. Carmella was running as fast as she could back to the start of tunnel. She got closer as she saw the light something happened to the creature it was almost like it was afraid of light so Carmella kept on running finally Carmella got out of the tunnel. So Carmella looked back in the tunnel and there was no creature. So she went back home to have some dinner with her family. The next day she went back to the creek to go put up an paper that said “DO NOT ENTER”. After all of that was done she decided to go back home and while Carmella was at home she got her writing book and she wrote all about what she did Yesterday. And Carmella lived happily ever After. The End.

Untie The Human Knot

Today instead of writing first, the class and I walked down to the field. We all played this game called Knot. It was a very fun game. So we all went outside in our colour groups like Red, Orange, Green, Yellow, Blue, and also Purple. Once we all got to the field we went to our groups again. In our groups we had to get in a little circle. Then on the count on 3 we all put our hands up. Next we had to link arms with the person that was either in front and also the person that was crossed over to you. But we weren't allowed to link arms with the person next to you because if you do it will not be a proper Knot. That is why we can’t do that in the game. The game was very hard because we had to try to untangle the knot two. But we were not allowed to let go of each others hands that made it very difficult for all of us. In about like 2 min went passed and not one group Mangier untangle the Knot. Finally one team Manier to untangle the knot and that team was my team the Orange Team. A little while the Red team got throw the hard knot two. After that Miss. West said to the Orange and the Red team to go lineup so that she could check on the other teams. Finally Miss. West came back and she said to the Orange and Red team “ you guys try to do it all together OK”. Then we all said “ Yes Miss. West”. So we all went in a circle and on the count on 3 we all put our hands up and then we linked each others hands that were in front of you or that was cross over to you. So we all link arms together and what happened was that all of our hands made the knot turn into heaps of hand looking like a blob. A while after the Yellow, Purple, Blue, and Green finish untying the knot. Then we all walked in a line back to class. Once we all got back to class we talked together about what we all just did out on the field.